I don't usually care. I could always skip through it and life moves on, but THIS- I can't even-- I was writing when I had to click on this fill because it was a multi-nation fic, the type I like to read. Now my writing juices have all but withered and died.
- "lubricated by the blood that flowed down pail thighs" >> France has PAIL THIGHS!
- "Commant...?", "Arret! Arret!!" >> Is this even French? There's also something off about the second one.
- Spain wept quietly on the ground in far to much pain to even blink. >> I was weeping along with Spain. I feel your pain, Spain. I feel your pain especially since I was writing about you.
I just had to stop after Spain got his turn on the chain-rape because dear god, why? I'm trying to give the filler the benefit of the doubt because maybe English might not be the filler's first language or maybe the filler tried his/her best, but I can't help but rage.
http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/6850.html?thread=10297794#t10297794
- "lubricated by the blood that flowed down pail thighs"
>> France has PAIL THIGHS!
- "Commant...?", "Arret! Arret!!"
>> Is this even French? There's also something off about the second one.
- Spain wept quietly on the ground in far to much pain to even blink.
>> I was weeping along with Spain. I feel your pain, Spain. I feel your pain especially since I was writing about you.
I just had to stop after Spain got his turn on the chain-rape because dear god, why? I'm trying to give the filler the benefit of the doubt because maybe English might not be the filler's first language or maybe the filler tried his/her best, but I can't help but rage.
And now I feel like a jerk for nitpicking.