aphanon_meme ([personal profile] aphanon_meme) wrote2013-09-15 01:06 am

part 340 tender lumplings everywhere

The best season is coming, meme! Halloween season! I mean... fall! Yeah, fall. I love the fall. I actually like every season in its own way, but I think fall has the best atmosphere. Crunching leaves and pumpkins and excuses to decorate the outside of your house with fake spider webs and zombie hands. Also it means... Hetalia Halloween fanart! (Maybe even... something from Himaruya? Maybe? Bueller? No?)

Enjoy part 340!

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Re: WIP and/or last finished

(Anonymous) 2013-09-18 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
Hmm...

Maybe, China isn't good at spelling! you know, like, Chinese signs that are written in poor English? And America, big hearted intelligent person that he is, is trying to help out!
daheroyoudserve: (anony)

Re: WIP and/or last finished

[personal profile] daheroyoudserve 2013-09-18 01:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yeah, I totally agree! I'm just trying to make the connection between being in a tree and spelling...


What about if they are trying to signal for help, and China spells it wrong?

Re: WIP and/or last finished

(Anonymous) 2013-09-18 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
... Yeah! Maybe they're both stuck in the tree!
daheroyoudserve: (anony)

Re: WIP and/or last finished

[personal profile] daheroyoudserve 2013-09-18 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I'll go back and make it clearer that they are!

Let's see...How's this???

China and America were sittingstuck in a really big ass tree with no branches beneath them to get down easily without breaking something and laying there for wait for it to heal. Neither of them knew how they got there, but there they were. Actually, China was blaming America for it, because everyone blames everything on America, even though that's just stupid. And America was blaming China for it because it was actually China's fault.

So, of course, since they were stuck there, they had to find a way to call for help. China was busy complaining about how his back hurt and in his day, the younger nations respected their elders and did all the work for them. America, being the awesome hero that he was, started gathering little twigs so they could make a HELP sign, and ignored the whining.

Re: WIP and/or last finished

(Anonymous) 2013-09-18 01:31 am (UTC)(link)
Hmm, hmm. I like it! The pacing is nice, characterization even--all in all a great WIP, anonymous author!
daheroyoudserve: (anony)

Re: WIP and/or last finished

[personal profile] daheroyoudserve 2013-09-18 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, anonymous reviewer! I'm always trying to get better at this!