part 370 fresh flowers on a side table in the morning

[aphanon_meme]

Um, 2020 was a year that happened. 2021 is a new year that will happen! With flowers! And side tables! And mornings! And I didn't want to make some sort of 20s-themed name because look what happened in 2020, look what happened.

Enjoy part 370!

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Re: WIP thread

[yuuago]

OOH, NICE.

I know you're saying you're having trouble with it, but this part here is pretty good so far. :D

Re: WIP thread

[(Anonymous)]

ahhh thank you!!

The main issue is that the entre WIP (about 5300 words so far) is unbalanced IMO. Big big chunks of exposition that sound nice but don't do much, story or emotion wise. I think what I will end up doing is like... taking the exposition and cutting it up and weaving it into the story better, maybe?

Re: WIP thread

[yuuago]

Aha, yeah, that does sound like a problem. Good luck with it! '3'

Re: WIP thread

[(Anonymous)]

Thank yuuago! \o/